Some people think that there should be more strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is controversial that whether or not government should implement some essential measures towards controlling noise making. While some people argue that they have freedom to make noise as their preference, I personally agree with the former.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some individuals advocate making as much noise as they wish. Firstly, they prefer playing loud music or taking part in video game music as their method to refresh themselves after a tough day at work. Elevated sound levels help to lift their mood and make them feel relaxed and comfortable. Secondly, they believe that unwanted noise results from industrialisation and urbanization. For example, construction activities such as mining and construction of bridges, high-storey buildings, stations, highways take place in almost in every place in the world where generators and modern machines are frequently used.
On the other hand, I believe that it is advantageous to impose intense measures about noise. The first reason is that exposing to high intensity noise results in immediate and acute effects to human health such as impairment of hearing, sleep disorder, hypertension and cardiovascular issues. It is worth noting that these effects may not sound troubling in early stage, however, when it comes to the long run, the consequences can be very worrying. The second, noise exposes in the workplace can lead to the decrease work productivity. White-collar workers who acquire white noise to complete their appointed tasks find it difficult to concentrate in a noisy workplace.
In conclusion, though noise making is unavoidable in modern society, it is recommended to have strict laws about noise control.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
It is controversial that whether or not government should implement some essent...
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...sound levels help to lift their mood and make them feel relaxed and comfortable. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40671641791 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95193120879 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6588000464 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223906630122 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777508964559 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631316578153 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142693976081 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482075464222 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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