Some people think universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every
subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have had different opinions when it comes to policies at universities. Some say that universities must need to create a balance between boys and girls participants in almost all fields, although, others do not agree with this policy. This essay will discuss both views of the people and why I think it is not a way to solve problems.
To comments with if the universities make a law about having the same number of boys and girls in their courses, which will rapidly decrease inequality, women will be complete with men in many fields. As a result of the survey, the University of GTU showed that there were nearly 3 big universities in India that made law on having an equal number of students of both genders on their campus, in fact of this nearly 89% of increments observed in the overall women Participant rate at higher positions in local authorities. Therefore, these types of evidence prove that if the university allows only an equal number of pupils, which leads to a better future for girls, and they will play a vital role in many areas.
On the other hand, if it is necessary to have the same number of adults in classrooms, which leads to people who have to wait for others to join in courses. In addition, people try to quit their favorite courses. As a result, there were over 30,000 boys who could not participate in over 20 courses because the ratio of girls in these courses was relatively lower than boys in the university of GTU in 2019. So, although this policy improves the situation in gender equality, it creates many problems for many other students.
In conclusion, despite having an equal number of attendances in the rooms at universities creates the same atmosphere for any gender in many fields, which brings many obstacles in admission processes for boys in courses. I disagree with this policy because it has more disadvantages than benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76829268293 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64020869689 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7854533696 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228835677909 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896349200518 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463033857945 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148850415324 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048814416402 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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