Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
People may find the word “university” is derived from the word “universe”, I think it’s because university is supposed to be a place where provide comprehensive knowledge. Some people believe that universities should teach graduates something more practical for their future working, or even the reason of going universities is for a well-paid job. I think this opinion is misleading youth and I do agree university’s main function is to provide knowledge.
Firstly, the skills people gain in universities are more theoretical compared to skills needed in workplace. This is because university is built for passing the most advanced and comprehensive knowledge to students, to those who are truly interested in their majors. However, the knowledge needed in workplace is usually more general and people can handle a job by practice. College is the place where aims to teach skills in specific jobs and people could learn working skills directly. Furthermore, university is the institution represents a nation’s highest education standard and science level. Universities are responsible for selecting talent students to do deep researches in each science area. There is a small numbers of these talent students will success and become scientists who make contribution to the development of our civilization.
Above all, although there are some courses which people feel are irrelative to their jobs, these courses may become someone’s jobs in their whole lives. University is the only place where train scientists, there is no doubt the main function of university is provide knowledge without other regards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...in specific jobs and people could learn working skills directly. Furthermore, universit...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...oubt the main function of university is provide knowledge without other regards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.624 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38982949424 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7988627673 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327753812412 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117173451072 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708863852732 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211849375299 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421175478383 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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