Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is widely acknowledged that universities are essential part of our societies. However, the main purpose of these places may lead a controversial debate, weather tertiary education should assure graduates useful knowledge for their future jobs or not. In my opinion, universities should equip graduates with information that they can use in their fields but scientific purposes should take into account as well.
Nowadays, contemporary higher education shifted its concept and focused more to foster well-equipped graduates. The reason is that today's demands are utterly different compared to higher education in the past. People who enrolled universities are expecting knowledge that they use in their future fields.
It is certain that there are a great deal of unemployed individuals who newly graduated from universities. This is because, employers do not rely those people’s skills and they mostly allocate vacancies to experienced workers. To tackle with this problem, higher education institutes should give courses properly as well as aid them to acquire rewarding experiences. For example, It can be beneficial to teach students up-to-date software or helps them to improve their foreign languages.
However, scientific tasks of universities should not be overlooked. It can be misleading to claim that tertiary education system should only focus on preparing their students for future. They should also be devoted to supply new insights to progression of science.
Overall, it is important to determine universities' position clearly. I believe that two main duties which is providing a useful education for their students and conducting important researches for societies future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73622047244 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02128610965 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2876262371 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246173041099 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819268067794 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520347898149 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133953040405 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481760094084 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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