Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
The chief aim of universities have become recently to provide graduates with information as well as skills which are highly required in the workplace. Although ,not everyone agrees with this idea claiming that the true function of universities is to give knowledge regardless the benefits of it to an employers. Personally, I agree with former idea relying on the following reasons.
On the one hand, over the last decade there has been a highly competition among graduates to engage into the career’s market. Civil engineers particularly a good example for this, when civil engineers became familiar which are highly required such AutoCad ,Etbas and MS projects, resulting on knowing these programs directly to considerable performance rise as well as give extra opportunity to get a job due to the high demands of engineers with knowledge related to their jobs. Thus, applying these programs in education system could lead to improvement in performance rate as well as preparing a qualified engineers for a certain job.
On the other hand, it may be claimed that, universities is place for variety of knowledge which prepare graduates to cope with various life's problems not specifically their specializations. For example, superior countries such as UK and USA its education entails variety of subjects unrelated to students future workplace which are extremely helpful such as languages course and cooking course .Therefore, if graduates had taught only its subjects, they would have missed lots of basis as well as could not deal with society perfectly.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that it is extremely necessary to access knowledge and skills which are highly beneficial as well as related to job field rather than unhelpful extra information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29929577465 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94917226358 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7780528049 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.222222222 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221605290247 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952796933299 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741908705099 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133665911227 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749231600746 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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