Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although some people subscribe a belief that that citizens` health care and education cost should be paid by the governments, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. Personally, I believe that this practice is unwise. The expenditures of health and education should be bared by ourselves.
Some sound arguments have been made to defense that people should pay for health care and education by themselves. First of all, the financial resource to cover the cost of people`s medical care and from taxpayers. If the governments funds people`s health care and education, it would cause a heavy financial burden on every taxpayers. Young taxpayer, in particular would boost their symptom of discontent about this practice. Furthermore, as the governments spend a large amount of money on people`s welfare of medical care and education, it would lead to a lack of funds for other necessary areas such as infrastructure, economic development and environmental protection. The society could not moving forward without booting in those fields. Last but not at least, this practice may hold an appeal to some illegal immigrates who come to the nation merely for free health care and education. Nevertheless,it would pose a serious threat to the society because of this unequal practice.
On the other hand, it is true the disadvantaged people need the the help from governments especial in medical care and education aspects. This is their basic right go win the government`s financial aids. They may receive support through governments for their education and healthcare needs. Based on this, they might change their social status in the future. Therefore they believe it is their basic right to require the government to introduce such a social welfare program.
To conclude, I concede that government should not ignore the disadvantaged people in our society. They deserve more financial support not only from government but from other charity organizations and individuals. However, the cost of healthcare and education paid by the governments is undesirable .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, in fact, in particular, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38066465257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11487581964 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9324380318 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095885219565 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306947833435 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041983844917 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616790112117 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394880743741 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.