Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although some people subscribe to a belief that we might keep all our income without paying tax to the nation, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. Personally, I am convinced that we do need to pay tax to the nation.
Some reasons have been made by some people to defense that they should own all their earning rather than paying tax. Nowadays there are an increase in living cost so that income tax would pose a financial burden on them. They believe it is more difficult to raise their income in current economic circumstance. Living standard of their family could be improved by the amount of money that should pay for the tax. Compared with some wealthy people, those who are belong to middle class are not willing to pay money to the nation as they don`t trust that the government spend their income tax in areas where they are really need. They argue that the government would not contribute their tax to their welfare and well-being.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that without tax our society would collapse. For one thing, governments can use the tax not only to redistribute the wealth but also to narrow the income gap. Those who work in a service fields such as teachers, laboratory researchers and public servants and so forth. They do not create wealth directly. However their contribution are as much as wealth creators. They therefore deserve the payment from the government .Furthermore, governments would spend money coming from income tax on the infrastructure medical facilities and education systems that would make our lives more convenient. Last but not at least, poor or low income families heavily rely on the financial aid from the government. Admittedly, our society turbulence would be attributed to discontent of the members from poor families. A lake of perfect tax system would pose a serious risk on normal people`s safety. Given above arguments,I believe that a society without taxpayers is not sustainable, and people will not be satisfied to live in such society. In order to eliminate some people`s concern our government also should spend the income tax in a proper way and listen to the voice of the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, at least, in fact, such as, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90616621984 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6932399962 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522788203753 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9322557315 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3157894737 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230796759171 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750251401702 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863471870307 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195626882961 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972054363676 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.