Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Taxation has been one of the most controversial issues for many years. It is sometimes claimed that people have the right to keep all of their money and therefore, there is no need for them to pay tax. Nonetheless, I wholeheartedly believe that this statement is awfully wrong-headed.
To commence with, this situation definitely will exert a negative impact on many public services. Initially, national schools and university is likely to be driven to the verge of lacking investment along with endowment from the government. As a result, a great number of students certainly have to struggle with the inequality or discrimination as they do not have the same opportunity to study in a good teaching environment. There is no denying that many students who are incapable of affording to study in a high level of educational environment will find it impossible to pursue their dreams, which will have the direct influence on the socio and economic development of the nation.
Furthermore, another noteworthy point is the effect it has on the national health. It is apparent that if people do not have to tax to the state, they will be required to pay an enormous amount of money in case they go to the hospitals to have a monthly general check-up or even have medical treatment. Consequently, in all likelihood there will be a sharp fall in the number of individuals who usually visit the hospitals to make sure they are in good health owing to being unable to pay for these medical services. This will affect the national health due to a lower rate of the life expectancy.
Last but not least, free- taxes puts the social welfare provided for the unemployed under the risk of suffering from a significant decrease. This status can make the gap between the rich and the poor become bigger and bigger, which is the main cause of many serious demonstrations and rebellions.
To sum up, I am totally against with this idea due to its terrible long lasting effects on the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84117647059 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85348084647 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7072131451 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941371325312 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029937593637 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056996115332 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502332533785 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506201323024 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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