Some people think that young people should follow the traditional values of their society. Others think that young people should be free to act as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Recently, the question of whether the young should follow the traditional lifestyles or modern ones has always been a topic of debate. Although someone state that youngsters should be free to act as individuals because old customs are outmoded, I suppose there are some conventional rules which are still compatible with modern life for the youth to observe.
On the one hand, it is obvious that some traditional values are outdated these days. For instance, in some Asian countries some decades ago, children needed to marry people who their family chose. This seems to be absurd nowadays since everyone has a right to happy and seldomly look for their lovers, which makes this old rule become old-fashioned. However, some ancient values are useful for society so that they can exist for a long time. For example, the rule of respect in a family that sons and daughters have responsibility for loving and taking care of their parents when they become older. Some customs like that will be suitable with moral values in any era so that the young should obey them.
On the other hand, there are two compelling reasons for young people to be free to pursue their passion. First, the belief of talented people should be doctors or engineers is the thing of the past because nowadays the young generation can do every job they want as long as they are legal. In fact, besides doctors and engineers, all other jobs can equip their workers with decent salaries and satisfaction. Another reason is that equal gender is appreciated now so that women can do more than just housewives like in the past. To illustrate, modern women hold a ton of important positions in society even the president of a country like in India compares with ancient women just can do the chores according to the old generation’s belief.
In conclusion, although some old-fashioned rules should be excluded so that the youngster can be themselves, some old ones still need to be prevented and developed due to their values.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Recently, the question of whether the young should follow the traditional...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, still, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89411764706 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57170523584 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4640362711 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274363878396 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101530016168 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714331746704 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166839000087 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235875339307 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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