Initially, some young people worked as mechanics or builders without learning in the university. In modern life, most young people prefer to go to university and just studying. This essay will take to discuss both sides and give some opinions.
Evidence suggests young people are good employees for the country because they have energy and they are hardworking and they can earn money at a young age and help the family. Work can keep young people away from, for example, addiction. However, as they learn without university and just to rely on experience, maybe they make a mistake. For example, builders will not build fantastic buildings so the economy isn’t improving and it's harmful for the country.
Some people believe young people should go to university. Because they can learn something new and improve science. They can invite something useful for society because the world always being changed and need new things. University gives more opportunities to young people for their life so they can choose the best work for themselves. But if young people just go to university, they don’t learn skills in the work and maybe they learn just theatrical and in emergency time, society has problems.
Overall, considering the points discussed above, I think some people should go to university and some people go to work and they link each other and help them. Because the country needs both of group people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and they link each other and help them. Because the country needs both of group people....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntry needs both of group people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08510638298 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4546368756 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8096627213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369868886424 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143435742459 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104058887356 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262023540223 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776106575139 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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