Some psychologists now believe studying the behaviour of 3-year old children can predict that some children will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you believe that crime is a product of human nature? What can be done to solve this problem?
Some specialists claim that 3-year old children's behaviour can indicate their future behavioural patterns - whether they may commit crime. Although I agree with the view that crime is embedded in our genes, there are other factors that cause people's wrongdoings. This problem can be mitigated through education and parenting.
To some extent, it is true that human beings are born with behavioural problems that can lead to potential crime. For example, children would do anything to satisfy themselves, such as destroying for pleasure, lying for hiding their faults and even stealing for pocket money. People may argue that these are merely minor problems, but we can see that anger, untruth and stealing are all sources of crime.
However, poverty and a broken family environment also can lead people to commit crime. First, if someone lives in extreme poverty for a long time, they are likely to steal or rob in order to survive. This can explain why crime rates in poor areas are often higher than in better off areas. In addition to this, people who grow up in broken families often have behavioural problems. As they may feel unloved and unwanted, it would be very possible to develop anti-social characteristics in their formative years, which could cause them to break the law in their adulthood.
To tackle this problem, we can provide better education and give children good parenting. Many people commit crime for money or possessions as they do not have a steady source of income. If the government and the local community can provide free vocational training, they would be able to get employed and feed the family without breaking the law. Furthermore, parents should spare no effort to tighten family bonds and establish good role models. It is less likely that children who grow up in a family with love and care would get involved in violence and crime.
In conclusion, I think the root of crime varies, but if people can receive a better education and have good family relationships, crime rates can be reduced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97941176471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55658942733 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7022850328 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270136683683 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973476591338 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813818033412 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170874851414 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04926688157 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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