Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that the mortality rate of human being have extended for quite long period and it is therefore retirement age of people should be maximize for little longer. This essay will agrees that pension period of individual should match the life expectancy ratio. The essay will first discuss the fact that extending work life of people in productive work definitely boost the credibility of any organization and how positive work force from mature people explore the better opportunity to maximize the economic benefit by reducing the additional admin cost in the office.
It is clear that mobilizing more experience individuals in office work by extending his or her professional tenure benefits the organization to maintain accountability in the performance. In another words they are quite oriented with the organizational policy and procedure regarding keeping record since long period, thereby extending the positive response from any monitoring mechanism even it is from the government authority. For instance, this is most evident in my county that maximum development sectors precisely non-government organizations revised their policy and make a favorable organization guidelines to incorporate experience professional for quite longer period compared to government rules of compulsion retirement at the age of 58.
On the other hand employing expertise knowledge for longer period means organization have more opportunity to reduce the cost of capacity development which may occur if the organization frequently allow the fresher to work. It seems more cost effective to organize refressor workshop at least twice to the old employee rather than organizing more numbers of intensive training in every their turnover. As a consequence of that office can save up good money from overhead and it can mobilized even more profitable sectors like share market. For example, The Himalayan times in March 2019 reported that 20 percent of corporate companies in Nepal is able to reduce their annual expenditure by extending the working period of old employee in the office work.
In conclusion, the fact that extending the working span of employee relating to their life expectancy benefits the organization to secure better reputations and it further leads the organization to have more strong financial status in long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maximized'?
Suggestion: maximized
...fore retirement age of people should be maximize for little longer. This essay will agre...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...mize for little longer. This essay will agrees that pension period of individual shoul...
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Line 9, column 483, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'mobilize'
Suggestion: mobilize
... up good money from overhead and it can mobilized even more profitable sectors like share...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5138121547 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98500060729 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549723756906 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0238850058 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.454545455 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9090909091 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146728038424 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596536978588 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498253374466 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907487879477 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073327910344 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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