Some say that economic development is the solution to poverty; others say it is the cause of poverty. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.

According to the few Nations, economic development is the only approach through which the poverty can be removed from the country. Not only this, but other conundrums of community could be solve by economic growth. This essaywill discuss the merits of the growth which leads to the in term of overall improvement of country.

To start with poverty:as it is the one of the common problem in all over the world because of which the dwellers face the majority of difficulties related to it. But it can be solve, if the economy of nation grows in order to the economic development,the government needs to provide more cities to the people and required to construct the industries, hospitals, Schools exactra. Which consequences, to create the job opportunities for the individuals. Because of this, majority of people get job and work. Which results into reduction in poverty. Thus, they will be able to feed their family.

furthermore, economic growth is a solution for almost all the problems of the society. this is due to the fact that, economic development includes the overall growth of the nation like related to education,employment, proper infrastructure facilities and many more. For example, education is an integral part of growth of economy. if the masses are well- educated, then they can lead to vanish the such kinds of community conundrums like dowery system, child labour etcetera. That is why, growth of economy is mandatory for the development of country.

in conclusion, economic growth is only the key factor for the improvement of the nation since, it includes the proper education, hospital, infrastructure facilities and employment which assist in countrie's growth.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21245421245 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0599917907 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3127870161 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924729772102 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346577965645 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344705102461 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543061658625 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193832052562 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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