In some societies, the responsibility of mother differs from the responsibility of father. What is the reason for this? And what do u think of the parental issues in the future?
It is true that the patterns of a family have greatly diversified, and women generally make dissimilar parents to men. There are many reasons for this trend; in my opinion, I believe that the responsibility of parents can be changed in the near future.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why mother and father have the different tasks in the family. Firstly, it is obvious that women play an important role in children caring because men are much more busy with their works and have to stay outside the home most of the time, while females have lots of spare time at home to share and take care of their children. Secondly, wives tend to appreciate to educate their children, especially adolescent stage compared to males, as the mother will endure enough to teach their children effectively. Thus, father is likely to earn money to fulfil their family’s need, whereas the mother is likely to look after and guide their children to the good persons.
On the other hand, some differences in the patterns of the nuclear families may happen in the not too distant future. In terms of the structure of the family, women can become the main breadwinner of their families as an alternative for the father who always plays a necessary role in the family finance in the past decades. As a matter of fact, if the housewives only do housework, they will feel bored, whereas their husbands who are easily stressed are often overburdened with work. So effective solution is that both parents go out to work because females and males have the same literacy and social skills. Thus, the wives have equal working opportunities to earn a living as the household duties or have taken place by their partners, leading to lightening their workload.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why members’ responsibilities are different in the family, and it seems to me that there are many changes in the family life with regard to family structures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate educating'.
Suggestion: appreciate educating
...their children. Secondly, wives tend to appreciate to educate their children, especially adolescent s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8244047619 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6444235357 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6948859199 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.083333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143121504654 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062680944884 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619121236361 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107385302957 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447667577298 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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