Some suggest that the young people should take a job for a few years between school and university.
Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this
Some people hold the opinion that the youngsters should pursue a few-year job between their senior high and their further education. This way of thinking has its own pros and cons.
On the one hand, spending several year on a temporary job before attending universities has some undeniable advantages. In this way, students may be able to gain some hands-on experience about the particular aspect of work that they will do in the future. These students will have better social and communicative skills, which enable them to become more effective employees. In addition, a short-term job can provide them with an amount of money to help them with their further education tuition and fees. If one decide to enrol at the university immediately after their high school, they will possibly have to rely on the financial support from families for accommodation, transportation…
On the other hand, the decision of not going to a universities can have some drawbacks. For the most part, the Vietnamese parents do not want their child to apply for further education later than anyone else in their age groups. The definition of “gap year” has just only arrived in Vietnam for a few years and has not been popular among the Vietnamese yet. So people will consider it as a risk more than a chance. A safer choice is to go to universities right away. On top of that, the longest time duration it can takes is about 7 years to finish some universities in Vietnam such as medical univesities… It will be to late to pursue a career at the time you graduate.
In conclusion, taking some gap years or not depend on people’s condition. It’s not very problematic as you have already considered carefully about your decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: a university; universities
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Suggestion: take
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.870901636 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2147596052 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244460611571 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785482433725 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643866549856 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152024154215 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405921965494 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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