Some teachers argue that students learn more effectively when study in groups while others believe it is better for them to study alone What your opinion

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Some teachers argue that students learn more effectively when study in groups, while others believe it is better for them to study alone. What your opinion?

The issue of whether students should interact and take part in group study activities or study alone has long been a debate to many. I concede that study in groups should be encouraged.
The most obvious advantages lie in the fact that could encourage students learn a wide range of skills, especially communication and teamwork skills, Which supposed to prepare for either university or “ the real world”. For example, when students learn in a group, they will separate exercise into small tasks, that make them develop teamwork skill and save time to gain in-depth knowledge in terms of this. Moreover, they are generally more encouragement and motivation than students who study solitarily, especially auditory and kinesthetic learners. In other words, group dynamic allows students are more chance to socialize can get assist from others how to answer the questions correctly and study is less boring.
On the other hand, those who hold an opposite indicate that students could neglect one’s task when they learn in groups. Obviously, That make it difficult for students concentrate on their school-work , because they could chat each other, even controversy without outcome. In addition, members of group is diversity in their academic ability, so difficult to discuss dealing their homework. But I think this this problem could be overcome if tutors or teachers give supervision and guidance on progress.
So overall, I confident that besides solitary learning, study in groups is bring a lot of benefits for students.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, in addition, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29098360656 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69714088056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651639344262 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5856453524 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31948605613 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114645570446 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056774054746 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182098046781 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575270660659 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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