Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays most of the educational institutes and universities upload their integral part of all the courses online, and also encourages students to learn online. Online learning has many pros. In my opinion, it is a positive development, which is shall highlight in the essay.
To commence with, uploading study material online makes it accessible from anywhere and at anytime around the globe. For instance, if a person is not able to attend some lecture due to any reason, he can cover it up later by accessing it online. Availability of courses online not only provides flexibility to tutors but also to the students. Online study also save the student's crucial time which he invest in commuting himself to the lecture hall. What is more, students can also manage their pace of study without any time bounds. Likewise, if a student wants to study for long hours, he can access to the course data, whereas, offline lecture do not provided that kind of privilege.
Moreover, it removes the punctuality errors, as the person can attend the lecture from starting if he was not on time. On the individual level, it becomes very advantageous as a student, as one does not needs to carry heavy books with himself, whereas a laptop or a phone can store or access the uncountable number of study material. This directly saves the paper and also an environmentally friendly method. As of my personal experience, when I was pursuing my bachelors, I always preferred for self-study over sitting in a lecture hall. This availability of online study material had not only offered me privilege for self-study but also for late overnight studies.
In conclusion, such developments are the advent of new learning system worldwide. Online learning has proved itself to be the best learning methods till now. As a student, who is constantly dealing with the hectic schedules of projects and assignments, one will always prefer online learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invests'.
Suggestion: invests
...save the students crucial time which he invest in commuting himself to the lecture hal...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...antageous as a student, as one does not needs to carry heavy books with himself, wher...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03115264798 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79406778068 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6682927427 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238376354524 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710087516311 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322772709335 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129712971305 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306259858336 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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