We are living in the age of technology so the online courses become prevalent. Presumably, it has not only advantages but also disadvangtages, but i think the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
First and foremost, the adversity of online courses is that the students can not fully understand owing to a lot of effects are able to impact their study negatively such as noise and many others which leads to the results that their own later carreer path will be affected adversily because of the misunderstanding in study time. Moreover, students who study online could pay more prohibitive price to compare with those who study directly and the reason is that online courses force lecterers to have more modern eqqipments and pay more efforts to get through students.
On the other hand, its advantages are considered as more significantly, we all know that most of universities are located in big cities which means the students who live in the countryside have to move to city to study, it take huge amounts of time, money and efforts to adapt with new life. Luckily, online study is a great method to help them study at home. Similarly, if you are a senior and want to have more degrees, study online able you to save time as well as you can study whenever you are free thanks to the recorded videos. Another factor that we have to consider is that home is always a place that you feel most comfortable and literally speaking with familar asmotphere, you are capable to think wider and deeper which is strongly functional to your study.
We can conclude that, although some negative effects, study online is great way of study in which you can study more effectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85121107266 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68873494905 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7340317751 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.777777778 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228147981222 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103368475423 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816824986512 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157418086824 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702180147408 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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