Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.Is this a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.

Is this a positive or negative development?

The study through the internet is being popular these days, few universities are providing facilities to achieve a degree through the internet. It's a positive development because students can save their time, also it helps the student to get enrolled in any courses with minimal tuition fees.

Firstly, learning through the internet help to manage our time, we shouldn't go to the universities/ colleges for pursuing a degree. Those time we spend by moving to the university make us free and duration can be utilized in other creative works and jobs. The scholars focouses on the topic and utilize their valuable time in research and other activities. For example, getting a foreign university either student have to get a visa or have to allocate their whole day in their learnings, but it helps them to achieve learning through the help of internet.

Secondly, The achievement of the international degree is everyone dream. The distance learning course is an effective approach to get this, to attend the college scholars shouldn't have to get a visa or pay high. Economically online education cost less than offline education because the learner doesn't use their own resources. High level of quality education is pursued and his or her capability reading online improves. The Coursera is a popular website for gaining online education, it offers lots of courses throughout the globe along with the managed time and schedule. The online course is more effective than others for most of the generals in the busy world.

In conclusion, Learning through the online is most preferable due to time management, flexible, economic and it helps the
students to enhance their knowledge with a high level of the education system.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14539007092 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71245073031 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5195412596 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180569115038 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606187443103 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445471484254 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932803652545 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752200588532 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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