Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Let us start by considering the fact that there are many alternatives to have when you are studying at tertiary education, some of which is online courses. This type of learning provided by universities due to the development of Internet these days, and in my opinion, this is a positive evolution in learning at higher education.
On the on hand, we can notice that the most advantage of this type of studying is flexibility. You can just sit there at home and attend online classes through a computer with internet connection. Moreover, your schedule can be arranged by yourself. That means you don’t get attached with time or space as much as you participate in a normal classes. Futhermore, you are not only able to choose between dozen of courses which fit you the most, but also able to see the documents relating to the course before picking one.
On the other hand, low-cost is another reason why you should take one of these online courses. Because of the grow of the internet, every line of business has theri own policies to reduce cost if you are using the internet, and this also happen to online courses. For example, a normal courses in learning English takes about 5 milion dong for 4 months. This number decreases to only about 1milion dong when you taking online classes. However, this type of learning apparently has many disadvantages, and i think the most signifincat one is interaction, which means you don’t have a opportunity to meet face to face with your lecture since you are learning through a computer monitor.
In clusion, although online courses have many pros and cons, it is still definitely a positive improvement in many perspective for higher level education.
Let us start by considering the fact that there are many alternatives to have when you are studying at tertiary education, some of which is online courses. This type of learning provided by universities due to the development of Internet these days, and in my opinion, this is a positive evolution in learning at higher education.
On the on hand, we can notice that the most advantage of this type of studying is flexibility. You can just sit there at home and attend online classes through a computer with internet connection. Moreover, your schedule can be arranged by yourself. That means you don’t get attached with time or space as much as you participate in a normal classes. Futhermore, you are not only able to choose between a dozen of courses which fit you the most, but also able to see the documents relating to the course before picking one.
On the other hand, low-cost is another reason why you should take one of these online courses. Because of the growth of the internet, every line of business has theri own policies to reduce cost if you are using the internet, and this also happen to online courses. For example, a normal courses in learning English takes about 5 milion dong for 4 months. This number decreases to only about 1milion dong when you taking online classes. However, this type of learning apparently has many disadvantages, and I think the most signifincat one is interaction, which means you don’t have an opportunity to meet face to face with your lecture since you are learning through a computer monitor.
In clusion, although online courses have many pros and cons, it is still definitely a positive improvement in many perspectives for higher education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t attached with time or space as much as you participate in a normal classes. Fut...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...you are not only able to choose between dozen of courses which fit you the most, but ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...one of these online courses. Because of the grow of the internet, every line of business...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... apparently has many disadvantages, and i think the most signifincat one is inter...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...action, which means you don't have a opportunity to meet face to face with y...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun perspective seems to be countable; consider using: 'many perspectives'.
Suggestion: many perspectives
...ll definitely a positive improvement in many perspective for higher level education. Let us ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perspective for higher level education. Let us start by considering the fact tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...many perspectives for higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, i think, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 41.998997996 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2848.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 582.0 315.596192385 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89347079038 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72801807904 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.278350515464 0.561755894193 50% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 929.7 506.74238477 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6472154054 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257524060313 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846287098592 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401061628999 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149303567108 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395371665691 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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