In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
It is undeniable that, many modern technologies had invented in farming sector, despite the world is suffering from the issue of starvation in different developing countries. The essay will examine the causes and possible solution on given topic.
First and foremost, among several causes, uneven distribution of resources is the major reason of hunger. The problem of starvation can be seen mainly in under developed or developing countries, where due to inadequate finance they cannot store food as needed. Similarly, due to the lack of literacy and finance, they are unfamiliar with modern technology and research in farming sector.
However, civil war and conflict also create the situation of famine. For Instance, country like Syria and congo, many people abandon their job and home due to the greatest fear of war. This type of conflict leave the victim of starve. In additional, wastage of food mostly in restaurants and hotels and increasing construction business are another issue in agriculture. Such as, many hector fertile land are occupied by business man for the purpose of housing due to increasing population. The restaurants and hotels are wasting food without any regret, due to the lack of estimating idea. However, changing climate of the world, different harmful pesticide, increasing interest in white collar job are another reasons of increasing starvation problem.
Secondly, as per the some possible solutions, firstly the world need to united in one organization in the case to eliminating famine from the world by considering food as the primary needs of people. By reducing uneven distribution and sharing advance technology can be the first step. Additionally, by saving the fertile land from the construction business it can help to reduce hunger. For example, the particular government should implement the strict rules on farming land and provide new and effective idea on urbanization. While, by proving various subsidies and facilities to farmers, government can attract the new generation in farming, despite of administration job.
In conclusion, farming and food is one of the essential thing to survive for under developed and developed countries as well. So, the world should be united and government also give more focus on agriculture sector by providing various facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43801652893 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90567668417 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548209366391 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.905058996 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.894736842 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130457027321 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360757345383 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368922230301 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607983341047 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210233218956 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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