Studying abroad is thought by many students to be the best way to get a good education. On the other hand, some students believe that studying in another country has many drawbacks.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often argued that going abroad to study offers the best chance of having a first-class education, while others suggest that there are numerous disadvantages to studying in a different country. In my opinion, I believe that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, study overseas provides many opportunities for students, who can learn advanced knowledge so as to enhance the scientific level. Firstly, Those students with glocally recognized certification and multi-lingual skills would become more attractive to prospective employers. For example, students who study overseas show initiative and the ability to adapt to usual situations. Secondly, living in a foreign country can broaden students' horizons. Students meet and communicate with many people from different countries. Therefore, they are exposed to different cultures and customs.
On the other hand, it can hardly be denied that there are some challenges international students have to encounter. The main issue is that some students experience culture shock. This is because there is a mix of cultures and people have different lifestyles. Many different things are considered unethical if a person mistakenly does something. For instance, in Chinese culture, people have a tradition to place chopsticks horizontally while eating. Leaving them in a bowl vertically is considered unfortunate. In addition, the language barrier can cause difficulties. For instance, lectures may be hard to understand if students don’t know how to communicate or interpret. As a result, it can be a hurdle in a route to success.
In conclusion, although there are certain drawbacks to international students, it seems to me that it is more beneficial to those people going abroad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52962962963 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1454650876 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2686615226 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9444444444 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.23603664747 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265211907962 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070415878908 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562404946688 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140265389967 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557042030291 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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