To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some people hold the view that to be successful in a business, the most necessary thing is good at maths. In addition, in my point of view, to be excellent in maths is not the only option that leads to business achievement and I partially agree with this view that people suggested.
On the one hand, although being good at maths is not the only way to business success, it is the fastest way that leads to being easy to approach business. First of all, if people are knowledgeable in math, they will be familiar with numbers soon and have the ability to think critically that’s why they can easy to lay a firm foundation as well as drive business to success. In addition, it also helps have a broader perspective in the field and have a good relationship in business. For example, in Korea, there is a boy who has a mathematics ability is so excellent. When he grew up, he has a seafood restaurant and it attracts a lot of international tourists.
On the other hand, there are a lot of ways that lead to excel in business not only to be well versed in mathematics. The businessman may not include with figures instead of hiring individual skills in the financial like using spreadsheets and computer programs. For example, my aunt is successful in business. My mom thought that she dropped out of school at the age of 14 but thanks to being intelligent and quick, she make a billion-dollar enterprise when she was only 24.
In conclusion, there are a lot of methods to drive a business to success but in my opinion, I completely agree with to succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...nks to being intelligent and quick, she make a billion-dollar enterprise when she wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48821548822 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79335495607 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6724448899 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253406276186 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906562385861 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101374806711 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183436540799 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930233780886 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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