A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The above sentences claims that the successful person is person with bulk amount of the money. I completely agree with the above line. As the money is the feedback of the effort put on to the work. Many engineers, doctor’s and scientist are wealthy enough with the great effort pulled in the past.
Firstly, I would like to elaborate my stand in the more convenient way. An individual’s life is mixture of up’s and down. So with the phase the resultant is directed towards the big amount of the money which could help an individual. So the struggle towards up’s and down make the successful person and the result of which is lot of money.
Furthermore, many successful business man like Mukesh ambani have achieve a lot of the money with that of hard work during the phase. For example, A.P Sindhu always believed that a person is known by the wealth than that of the other things. Yet there are many politicians who earn money with the wrong activities. So this person cannot be termed as successful person. As it evolved many wrong activities for money. Likewise, many dons are also there which have big amount of the money as they do harmful activities. So good deeds and money are the key thing for the success of an individual.
Moreover, I conclude that the money come from the hard work and thus the combination the money and hard work leads to a successful. Hard work and money are the two wheel for the successful life. Thus I conclude that a person become successful by the means of the money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
The above sentences claims that the successful person is person wi...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I completely agree with the above line. As the money is the feedback of the effort...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ul business man like Mukesh ambani have achieve a lot of the money with that of hard wo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
...d work during the phase. For example, A.P Sindhu always believed that a person is...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...many dons are also there which have big amount of the money as they do harmful activit...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...nation the money and hard work leads to a successful. Hard work and money are the two wheel ...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... the two wheel for the successful life. Thus I conclude that a person become success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66296296296 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57674787855 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7012835643 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.9444444444 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260854018348 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915236427731 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637867799379 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15560104805 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494400465042 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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