Task 2: In the future, nobody will print newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Having an opinion supposed that, in the prospective time, people will turn down to buy newspaper or books while they can easily find it online and free. Otherwise, nobody will produce those things anymore. I disagree with this definition owning to reading habits and stuff relate to internet connection and health.
It is apparent that in modern life, most people used to use many technology equipments such as phones, computers, laptops, tablets, ... doing works include reading information. In my opinion, I think it is not a useful way to enjoy.
Firstly, it can harm your eyes if you don’t keep a safe distance from the screen. Especially, children should not be allowed to use mobile phones too much so that their sensitive eyes can be prevented from diseases relating to sight. Although sometimes reading in this way is free, you will not want to waste your time in the hospitals
On the one hand, some especially famous e-books still must be paid by an amount of massive fee and it is not a reasonable price considering whose have low-paid salaries. Definitely, the money for reading these kinds of books through internet partly is higher than the traditional ways. Nowadays, books and magazines sold on newsstands are pretty cheap and affordable for every people wanting to research or increase knowledge. So, pricing just a little issue.
Obviously, comparing the past and present, adults and old people still have a habit of reading in a physical way. They want to something simple and easy to use because their technical ability is not good. And finally, when connection interrupted, Books and magazines will become the best choice, suitable for the community which live near seas, mountains or uncultivated land
In conclusion, I definite that we should use printed materials in order to protect our health and remain continuously traditional reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a physical way" with adverb for "physical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ld people still have a habit of reading in a physical way. They want to something simple and easy...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear seas, mountains or uncultivated land In conclusion, I definite that we should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09771986971 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66680611705 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667752442997 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6766370328 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24095325993 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069100345069 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492652612992 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103252472067 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607714057734 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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