Task 2: It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, tourism has becoming in a matter of discussion. Some people believe that should learn the local culture of other countries through books, movies and the Internet and we do not need to travel other nations to learn new things. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this.
There are a several reason why I agree that people should lean the custom of other countries through books or films. Firstly, it helps people to saving money from reading books or watch on Youtube. For example, poor people do not have a large their budget to pay flight ticket compared with wealthy people so they can not travel to other countries. For this reason, using the internet is very useful for them to looking up information about foreign culture such as habitats, fashion clothes or the local food. Secondly, people learn a lot of knowledge about history or personalities of foreign countries. This is because books or the internet contain enough information from people who experienced to other countries and knew foreign custom. Thus, they wrote books or made video to talk about something they know.
There are a numerous reason why I feel that people should not travel to other countries. First of all, language is a big barrier between person and person and make people meeting difficult in communication. For instance, if foreign visitors travel to Vietnam, they need to learn basic some sentences in conversation. As a result, it helps them easy talk to local people. Furthermore, people could be appreciated bad behavior because of their action. To illustrate, when someone talk aloud with Japanese people, he or she will be hated by local people. Normally, Japanese people talk with other people slow and light tongue. Therefore, people should find information about culture of other places before traveling.
In conclusion, people travel to other countries to learn the foreign custom that is not essential and people can lean it through movies, books and the internet. In my view, it is very beneficial for us to learn things in websites because it helps us to saving money and know new things in the internet compared with visiting to other places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'talks'.
Suggestion: talks
...eir action. To illustrate, when someone talk aloud with Japanese people, he or she w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97796143251 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52408053612 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4741893063 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.35 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368105720474 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113897339912 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102916664748 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263705102812 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466960571317 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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