Task 2: large businesses have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
what problem does this cause?
what could be done to encourage people to buy local products.
There is a growing tendency towards consuming products and services of large enterprises due to the fact that strong financial resources provide them an inequitable advantage over small companies in terms of marketing and competition. In my opinion, this could result in a number of issues and steps need to be taken to stimulate consumers’ spending on local products.
The main issue caused by the aforementioned trend of consumption is that it endangers the development of local economy. In the context that consumers’ behaviors are nowadays easily influenced by adverts and sales promotions, it is obvious that small-scale business entities are losing their marketshare to big companies which consequently lead to their closure. As many local residents closely depend on local businesses for their livelihood, the diminution of local businesses means the degeneration of the quality of lives in local areas. Moreover, some traditional local products that are symbols of traditional values of regions might disappear in losing their marketshare battle against big companies.
However, there are various measures that could be taken to tackle the problems. One measure is that the government should provide production subsidies for local businesses in order to reduce the price of local products and offset the losses. The decrease in price of local goods would make them more attractive to customers and thus boost their demand. Also, some vulnerable and traditional local products should be offered discounts or free advertising by sponsors and authorities. Finally, the government could hold educational campaigns to raise civic residents’s awareness about the importance of local products to the economy and culture of the regions.
In conclusion, the preference of people to large business products leads to some problems which could be resolved by some presented above measures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62629757785 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07521948689 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2825711136 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228260498595 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807464429697 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431483978627 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137508093753 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195496775527 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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