Task2: Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Having an opinion supposed that in the modern life, many people choose to independently business rather than doing a dependent job because they not only want to become a boss but also making a lot of money from private enterprises. Without advantages, this thing definitely has a couple of drawbacks.
First, it is the fund problem. A start-up can not succeed if they do not have enough money to operate their company. As reality reflected, predominantly organisation had given up after a couple of years trying to make a lot of efforts owning to lacking finance. They need money for import and export, pay for employees, research, promotion, and production. You can be in debt and impossible for operation. And of course, you do not need to worry about that if you are an official employee
Secondly, the ability and knowledge in many areas are obligations. To become a boss, you must own competencies in many fields and you work better than all of your workers. Knowing related information in different domains helps to make decisions much easier and guiding everyone to rectify their falses. By contrast, a staff never think about that, you just need to know about your professional skills.
And finally, that are external elements. For example, the covid 19 pandemic has been changing all works related to business, leads to many difficulties for direct selling and opportunities for e-commerce business. In that circumstances, creative actions to improve your company are necessary.
In conclusion, if you want to be a mighty boss, you will need to study a lot and use your brain effectively. By contrast, an employee just does the deligated works which have from senior. Considering because private enterprises are hazardous and you have to choose between the stability and dangers when working in business
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pinion supposed that in the modern life, many people choose to independently busi...
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...ne to rectify their falses. By contrast, a staff never think about that, you just...
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...ity and dangers when working in business
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86166035721 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8620935551 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4705882353 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134721304573 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398730642962 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455465547062 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733783277991 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178284134237 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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