Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do you think television has positively or negatively affected cultureal development? c
Recent decades have viewed a tremendous change which are trigged by television in all aspects of society. Although many people subscribe to believe that television contribute some positive factors to cultural development , this is in fact a common misconception we need to clear up. I personally believe it also exerts an adverse impacts on cultural developments.
On the one hand,with the prevail of television, introduction of various cultures broadcast by it will arouse peoples `s curiosity and intrigue. Also people`s awareness of protecting some endangered traditional cultures would be raised. For example, if people learned that the culture of remote Eskimo community would be disappear because of climate change, it could spark off a intense discuss about this concern in society. At the same time , people would appeal governments to take some measures to protect this culture. Hence, to some extend it is favorable to cultural development.
On the other hand, some sound arguments can be made to illustrate that television would be detrimental to culture developments, Firstly, as watching TV accounts for majority of people`s leisure time, it gradually change people`s believe, custom and even social morality. They Television is reshaping people and society. For example many eastern young people discard traditional lifestyle and lead the western lifestyle which are showed by television. Secondly, to local culture , television will bring culture invasion. For example, one place with culture identity, people are more likely to rush to the place for traveling. Consequently,indigenous culture will be challenged by overwhelming tourist and presumably changed by outside culture. Ultimately,with increasing appealing of television program, people would have no time to study and inherit their own culture. Conversely, they are prone to chasing what is broadcast by television.
Given above arguments, I am convinced that nowadays television have broaden our horizon but it also poses a serious threat on culture development.Therefore, people should pay attention to its negative side-effects and take measure to avoid them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, for example, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75700934579 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30977039906 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604361370717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5317635549 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.705882353 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222408900916 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839332804775 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616288142485 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147648995031 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493557715365 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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