The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Since the beginning of life, individuals have always live and migrate in groups. It is part of human nature to want to be accompanied rather than being alone. Nowadays, it can be observed that humans behave and dress up in similar ways. Some believe that this is due to the tendency humans have of copying others. This essay shall explain why indeed humans tend to copy each other.
Throughout someone’s life, the learning process never stops. One of the most common ways of learning is by observation. Since very young, people copy their parents sounds and gestures and when they are adults, they still remain to copy other people's manners. For example, if someone moves to a different country where the language spoken has a slight different accent, the person will most likely end up copying the same accent.
Another reason why someone may copy someone else’s manners is because they see the other person as a model from whom they can learn. For example, if a group of people go out for lunch and one of them is not confident on the way he or she uses the utensils, they may observe and copy from the ones who know, so next time he or she knows and feels comfortable going out.
There is a tendency for humans to excel on their social environment. Therefore, sometimes they copy others in order to fit into a specific social group, even if that implies changing the way they really are. For example, some people, would buy the most recent version of a phone or they could start drinking and smoking because that is what the other people in the group do.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the suggestion that humans have the tendency to copy others due to their nature and personal choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70529801325 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3565390241 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2323490282 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181097609619 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665722246003 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443301632541 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107379759321 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429949255207 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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