The tendency of human to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extend do you agree?
There has always been a natural inclination in human to imitate his fellowman, which can be seen in different aspects of people's life. It is said that this feature, particularly in recent years, has found its way in fashion industry and consumer goods. I completely agree with this view.
One the most prominent field in which the tendency of man to replicate each other can be clearly observed is fashion clothes. Fundamentally, the reason why this industry has been established is that people tend to repeat other's behavior, particularly the famous ones, perhaps to feel belonging to a group. Youngsters may think that they will be seen as an outdated person unless they are fashion- conscious. As a result, without considering what fashion matter they had before, keeping up with the latest one readily. As an obvious example, every year, a unique color is introduced as "the color of the year" to the public around the world, affecting all facets related to people's way to wear clothes or even decorated objects. This is a living proof of a famous proverb saying: when in Rome, do as the Romans.
Another subject illustrating human desire to duplicate others is associated to consumer goods. Belonging to a group used by customers directly, these types of products are extremely popular to be produced. Therefore, counterfeit consumer goods based on imitation goods that are offered for sale at much lower prices than genuine products has been emerged recently. For instance, having realized the popularity of Nike and Reebook shoes in Middle East countries, China took this opportunity and launched the knockoffs extensively. This level of imitation shows that not only would the emulator nature of human be unchangeable, but it is also immensely powerful.
In conclusion, I believe that the tendency of duplication is an inborn factor in human which can be visible in various sides including style of wearing or purchaser products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... world, affecting all facets related to peoples way to wear clothes or even decorated o...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...style of wearing or purchaser products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14150943396 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78850683007 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8781140079 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19704099719 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602884888921 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480336982648 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103200554608 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241622510944 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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