In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
It is increasingly common that new modifications to the products are the highlights of many advertisements. In my opinion, this trend can be explained for two main reasons and it exerts a positive influence on both the products and consumers.
To begin with, human behavior and the company's profit can be attributed to businesses adding some new elements to items. People, especially those in their 20s, put much attention to their material life since society nowadays usually makes their judgment
about others relying on their appearance and their assets. As a result, young customers, who are normally the main target of this type of promotion, would like to spend more on any new products being advertised to prove that they are trendy and fashionable. This phenomenon can be exemplified by long lines of people waiting to buy the iPhone 11 on the first day of its release. Moreover, the companies can prolong their marketing campaigns by changing the highlighting features in their advertisements. Take Coca-Cola as an example; there are few changes that can be made to the recipe of this soft drink. However, the corporation in recent years always introduces a limited edition of cans and bottles in accordance with special occasions like Tet or Mid-Autumn festival. This practice not only satisfies buyers’ thirst for novelty but also leaves a profound imprint on their minds. Therefore, in their next purchases, customers are more inclined to buy this beverage, thus increase its profit
In general, I believe this is a positive development. This is because companies are likely to put more effort into developing their products and brand images in order to survive and gain a bigger share of the competitive market. As a result, consumers will have access to a wider range of high-quality options that can equip them in their lives
In conclusion, customers’ demand and the turnover of the product have motivated businesses to advertise about the changes in their product. The resulting effects are the improvement of the creation and increased satisfaction of buyers. Thus I am in favor of the continuation of this trend.
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also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1547277937 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91909161999 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7375333347 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.933333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349428050591 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103779161348 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638305607806 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194509243193 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298848103569 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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