There are increasing number of people who do not know their neighbour what causes this situation how to solve it

Essay topics:

There are increasing number of people who do not know their neighbour. what causes this situation? how to solve it?

As the society is transcending towards the globalised 21st century, global people live self centered life. It is fact that many people around the world are unaware about their neighbours. There are many reasons for this given situation; however, there are few preventive solutions too. This essay will discuss both the aspects in ensuing paragraphs.

To begin with, there are many root causes of residents do not know much about who lives in their society. The most important reason is workaholic. In other words, people follow hectic schedule. They are busy in their own life because of work and personal issues. They have not enough time to interact with others. The second reason for this situation is civilians become self dependent and their entertainment sources are also within their own limit.To explain, people do their work by own and enjoy recreational activities at home like TV and surfing net. For instance, nowadays people play more video games and watch Tv alone rather than going out with neighbour.

On the other hand, there are some preventive measures to solve the given issue.The foremost remedy is society will organize some get together events as well as celebrate festivals with neighbours.This will bring people close to each others and make relation strong. The another solution of such situation is encourage children to play outdoor games in society park, this will also help to people interact with neighbour and know each other very well.

To recapitulate, it can be finally commented that there are many causes of people unaware about their neighbours because of work ,hectic schedule and self dependence; however, the aforementioned solution such as celebrate events with society and playing games in park can solve the problem.

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Average: 6.1 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54910771418 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9561854074 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264412410565 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817501697139 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643791038826 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151640331333 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521229528936 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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