There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It is true that, a rich variety of musical styles can be found throughout the world. Music is an essential aspect of the culture and life. In the following paragraph, I am going to show the reason why music is necessary in our daily life and also answer the question whether local music of a nation is more valuable rather than international music.
First of all, music is required in a person life for various reasons. It helps a person to release the stress, and open the window for peace. It is kind of mind refresher. For example: when we feel pain or over pressured by our task, then we take a break and listen the music. Few person even listen music while they work because it brings speed on their work. In short, it is a food of our soul. Moreover, music is an essential ingredient in many special occasions. For instance: without playing or singing a song, celebrating birthday party is totally impossible. Music is directly or indirectly connected throughout our whole life.
Secondly, from my point of view, traditional music is more valuable rather than globally heard music. Modern international music is quite good, but you will not find any element of your culture because they are totally marketing based. While in your local music, you can feel yourself properly. For instance: it will take you to the past of your nation which will help you to make a connection between past and present. In addition, traditional music tells a nation culture, custom and their history. However, local music is a form of cultural identification.
To conclude, I believe that music is one of the most vital factors of a nation’s existence. So to keep your nation’s culture alive, we should not give more importance to international music over traditional music.
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...ional music over traditional music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, kind of, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86184210526 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72879637201 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2548086226 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446374523361 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141585761859 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108532700719 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300217077274 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568700501509 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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