There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, there are vary kinds of music listened to around the world. As a matter of fact, music not only bring some advantages to people life but also make the world more lively. Besides, I believe that country music is more important for everyone than the world music because it shows culture and dignity of each country.
First of all, people and music have interactive effect. For example, we were heard lullabies as we were born. This got the first people’s feelings about music. Day by day, we were taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment. Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. Another benefit of music is that it connect people together. People delight in singing with others and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age. People who have the same musical tastes will become more closer.
In addition, people is easily attracted by catchy tune of contemporary music; however, traditional music play an important role in culture of a country. For instance, when oversea residents come to our country, they will have discrimination in dignity and culture’s nation by going sightseeing, visiting museums, especially by listening folk music. Furthermore, country music connect us to the past and mark historic events. For example, the “Ho Keo Phao” song depicted heroic struggling stage from 1945 to 1954 of Vietnamese.
In conclusion, music have lots of advantages and also strongly need in our life. Unfortunately, traditional music are being forgotten. If the government not have methods to preserve and develop it, culture of country will be disappeared.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...ave the same musical tastes will become more closer. In addition, people is easily attract...
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Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culture of country will be disappeared.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14189189189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8629120703 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9149316442 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378296701885 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140811750904 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923000008753 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255480104299 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746635626979 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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