There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?.is the traditional music more important for a country than the international music we heard nowadays?
There is a question in importance of music. Basically, music consists of rhytm and sound. Rhytm and sound always come together such as in everytime we talk, in bus engine, in people's step, even in a wave of water affected by a falling of splashing rain. Music is a sign of movement, and a sign of life.Without music, we just a silence.
Inspired of the nature sound, traditional music was created. This is why traditional music has each character in each place. Every place has its nature, and each nature captured by multi intrepretation of person. Therefore traditional music always brings a listener to the place whereit comes from and becomes an identity of a country. A traditional music is a symbol of a country, a great culture that shows a community of people personality.
In another hands, we live in a universe where a difference is absolutely real. Sometime we do not to insist with identity. We particularly show our university to walk together with a thuosand different culture.
Beside of show how deep our traditional music brings a happiness and peace, we also try to understand that modern music is more global than traditional music consecuently, the modern music is usually more easy to be understood by majority human.This music commonly listened across of country, by the music people can send message easily.
To sum up, this will be greater if we can be united without leaving our identity. Thus, perhaps a combination of traditional and modern music can be one of ways to make it comes true
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86153846154 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88039691545 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.5721380338 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447140915038 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156950570064 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107763935567 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236772830252 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105648069153 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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