it is often said that music is a magic and it is difficult to imagine life without music. Human beings like to listen to music from action and their methods changed over time. Nowadays youngsters more prefer to International music than traditional but I would argue that the traditional music is more important compared to foreign music for the number of reasons.
As we know we are living in the modern era and the people have influenced by the international music because they think that western music is more entertaining and energetic than traditional music. 60 percent of people in India are under 40 years and they spent their spare time in theatre, pub and party where they always select pop and jazz music. For example, last year in Mumbai international singer Justin Bieber performed and there was too much crowd.
However, I believe that traditional music is more meaningful because it represents our history, beliefs and coustems.A fading traditional music is like loosing one's own culture and it is a real dilemma particularly for younger citizens. if we will run away from our traditions, it is very harmful to our own identity language and culture. furthermore, everyone should have known about the origin of his culture, values. For instance, in the fight of freedom traditional music played a vital role to encourage people for independence.
To conclude in my point of view traditional music is rich in culture and it represents civilizations of one's country. we should stimulate especially youth generation to listen to traditional music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08560311284 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83216632703 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0191629945 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415667534739 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161709535562 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124813794916 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270920979164 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086666390968 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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