There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is it international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Music is an important aspect of peoples lives all over the world. It can be argued that the traditional music is of paramount importance when compared with international music. This essay will outline the importance of both music and also give my opinion on them.
Without a doubt, music is very important to our lives in various ways. Firstly, people listen to music to get enjoyment and pleasure in our daily lives. Music helps people to relax whether at home or to relieve boredom on long journeys. Also, people listen to music in the clubs at night. Not all of these alone, it is evident that music is also part of educational curriculum where students learn how to play musical instruments. Furthermore, music is a way to express ones culture, it is known to be used in religious ceremonies such as weddings, funerals and likewise yearly festivals.
In considering which music is more important, there is no doubt international music is important but this should by no means over shadow traditional music. It can be argued that, traditional music should be given paramount priority as this helps the society to know the history and also retain knowledge about their culture. In addition, international music gives one insight into other peoples cultures and this will inturn strengthen relationships and we thereby enjoy the same kind of music.
To conclude, it has been argued that both traditional and international music are important but uttermost priority should be given to traditional music as to facilitate the growth of the culture of a country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, likewise, so, then, as to, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03461538462 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80724706691 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9553539903 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472884794711 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196620697755 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828762898157 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331957907806 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504577100429 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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