There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the internet has become a more debatable topic in the world. Many workers do their work from home and students learn from their homes because computer technology become cheaper and affordable. While it saves costs of transportations and provides flexibility to people, it requires a strong internet connection and not working in remote areas. In this essay, I will explain both sides of the statement and why I think it creates a positive impact.
To embarks with, the biggest drawback of this computer technology is it requires the internet. If a person does not have a proper connection to the web, he cannot connect to the receiver side. Secondly, these types of modern technologies cannot be accessible in remote areas by people due to geographical conditions. For example, the majority of areas in Kashmir(India) have mountains as a result, not a single mobile operator or internet provider established their networks due to costs and locations. This had resulted in the lack of online education systems in the state. Hence, the fewer internet connections, the fewer citizens access online courses and do work from home.
On the other hand, one of the major advantages of this development is better flexibility. Firstly, when the universities and big organizations allow their people to work from home, people can do their work in any place and any time. It leads them to spend more time with their close ones. Moreover, it will reduce the cost of transportations, which results in traffic on roads and fewer pollutions in the environment. For instance, since google allowed their employees and interns to finish their assignments by sitting in front of a desktop, all people spent more time with families and were happy than those who worked in cabins. Therefore, the more workers work from home, the more they have time for personal lives and the environment becomes healthier.
In conclusion, although the computer requires an Internet connection for work from home and cannot be available in remote areas, which will benefit users and nature. In my words, despite having several disadvantages, its advantages are superior and create a positive impact in the world.
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Suggestion:
... create a positive impact in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82999404445 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560224089636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5059379816 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36007351469 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102775849614 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107408337911 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218120039235 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101038256034 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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