There is a fact that a number of parents now increasingly desire to send their children to study overseas. What are the reasons for this trend?
Nowadays, it is obvious that the enhanced living standard leads to the demand of highly professional education. More and more parents have in the hope of sending their children to study abroad for two reasons.
First and foremost, the main cause of this trend is that studying abroad is able to enrich students’ horizons. It supplies students more opportunities to experience different styles of education. Pupils are equipped valuable and up to date knowledge which makes it easier for them to find jobs after graduating. The professionally educational systems allow them to make use of hi-tech and scientific achievements or approach to leading experts who can introduce them to the most branch findings of the top researchers in the fields.
What is more, another noteworthy point in favor of studying overseas is that it can evolve students’ personality. Pupils might find studying overseas really can make them more mature and become independent. They have to deal with many problems by themselves and learn how to get accustomed to a new environment. Being in a new place can be overwhelming at first but it tests students’ capacity to adapt flexibly to diverse situations.
To sum up, studying overseas enhances students’ knowledge and plays a crucial role in their personal development. This makes the number of pupils studying abroad intensify significantly in these current years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34977578475 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13094414465 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5617176093 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157046914469 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589197574359 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071300635434 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107284073384 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542441174991 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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