There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?
Nowadays, the number of people who study in university increase considerably. while there are persuasive arguments in favor of raising academic achievement levels, I would argue that it is better to have different level of education in the society.
On the one hand, some people believe that increasingly the number of university students have some positive aspects. From their point of view, if people obtain higher qualification, they are more likely to find a decent job in the future, escaping the cycle of poverty. Therefore, such this society is less likely to suffer from some existential threats, famine, drought or outbreak of diseases for instance. Because it has a wide range of experts from various fields. They also mentioned that having a higher credential lead to inhibition of social gap, causing a unity community.
On the other hand, I believe that raising the students of the academic institute has caused some dire consequences. Foremost among these perhaps is the issue of the unemployment crisis, whereby the economic recession has made the labor market substantially competitive and so workers and employer are under pressure to cooperate in this process, fearing loss of promotion or redundancy. In this situation, the high incidence of depression have occurred for them, decreasing their productivity dramatically. Furthermore, 'brain drain' situation is completely probable in this condition, where the young, ambitious individuals migrate to other countries, hoping better career prospect.
In conclusion, notwithstanding some people mentioned that going up University student number would decrease social discrimination, I am of the opinion that the drawbacks overshadow the benefits because of joblessness consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65909090909 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11097172717 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6878573782 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230732756107 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783061671025 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646112552977 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135499860829 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430326118701 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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