There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people say that the internet is the most effective discovery in human history. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view since it brings many benefits for human.
The first reason why the internet becomes the most crucial invention is that it allows people to access information more easily and quickly. With modern technology devices such as mobile phone or laptop, students are able to get access to the electric library at school to search and read documents related to their subjects, and this helps them to study whenever they have time. If not having the internet, students might face many troubles when they find materials that support their education. Furthermore, using social networks encourages people to share and deepen their knowledge about a specific filed. In fact, some individuals who are interested in music and art could visit ANC site in my country, which allows them to make new friends and learn more knowledge together.
Another reason is that the internet plays an important role in the development of economy. Firstly, most business transactions are processed through emails and video conference meetings, which makes a good condition to save time and costs for international companies. If people until have to pay a visit to other countries to sign trade contract, global business is really difficult to be more effective. Additionally, shops and other services are now available online. This means that people might buy goods and services from the comfort of their homes, encouraging them to have a tendency to shop more. For instance, my relatives often make payments more for their entertainments through the internet.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet is the best innovation in human society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20774647887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67083209479 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8050766985 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242358295556 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829219140752 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722829708723 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161078705441 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986006293336 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.