There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people say that the internet is the most effective discovery in human history. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view since it brings many benefits for humans.
The first reason why the internet becomes the most crucial invention is that it allows people to access information more easily and quickly. With modern technology devices such as mobile phones or laptops, students are able to make use of the online library at school to search and read documents related to their subjects, and this helps them to perform better at school. Furthermore, using social networks on the internet encourages people to share and deepen their knowledge about a specific filed. For example, some individuals who are interested in music and arts could visit ANC website which allows them to make new friends and learn more knowledge together.
Another reason is that the internet plays an important role in the development of economy. Firstly, most business transactions are processed through online payments and internet banking, which saves time and reduces unnecessary expenses for international companies. If people have to pay a visit to other countries to sign trade contract, global business is really difficult to be more effective due to high travelling cost. Additionally, shops and other services are now available online. This means that people might buy goods and services at home, encouraging customers to spend more and therefore increasing companies’ profits. For instance, in recent years, online sales in my nation has been increasing considerably.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet is the best innovation in human society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36882129278 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78374780332 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8081928539 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24015596631 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793067395041 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684947907998 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150662670145 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089581308476 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.