There seems to be increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as deterrent, many people think other measure will be needed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that, nowadays number of illegal activities are increasing day by day though it leads people towards wrong path and vanished their life. It is often argued that death penalty is one of the major factor for considering crimes rate, whilst other disagree and think that always fixing punishment will not be suitable so other factors like reason and circumstance behind crime should be examined before punishing. This essay agree that making punishment permanent helps to create social stability and peace in society. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that fixing punishment as death penalty for each crimes automatically helps people to live a prosperous life without fear of being victim of any crime. Moreover, people will afraid of involving in illegal activities and become more rational as well as responsible towards nation and society. It is therefore agreed that death penalty will be worthwhile for stopping offensive behavior and providing freedom for people to live happily and freely. For example, an individual knowing he/she will subject to certain punishment if they are involved in given crime will never ever participate in such activities.
However, many disagree and feel that fixing punishment is not the solution as various factors like reason and circumstance behind crime should be find for low down the crime rate. Sometime nature, reason and subject matter may differ from one crime to another crime so that according to nature strict rules should be made by government. Not only that, for each crime strong and dangerous punishment should be made. Despite this, crime rate still be decline through death penalty. For instance, direct death penalty for each crimes makes people afraid and it is one of the best measure to dismiss the crime rate quickly.
In conclusion, fixing punishment as death penalty quickly spread the fear among criminal and reduce illegal activities whereas beside this according to level of crime people should be punished. At last I personally think that death penalty will be perfect against serious offensive crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
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Message: Did you mean 'found'?
Suggestion: found
...and circumstance behind crime should be find for low down the crime rate. Sometime n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23235294118 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48110332361 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2386338233 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306122904092 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119512188928 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669809474012 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208085202568 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257730175806 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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