There was a time when people only shopped out of necessity, but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity. People dont appreciate the value of money anymore. To what extent do you agree with this view ?
Economically, the fate of the world over decades improved to every extent. We all should thank the ones that are responsible for its boom as it made our lives better in many aspects. However, like everything has its negatives, spending money on shopping also becoming more like a hobby than a necessity. Whether or not people appreciate the money is discussed below before giving final verdict.
In previous times, one has to wait for job like desert wait for rain and in the mean time they attain the maturity that imbibes responsibility from all hardships they faced. Where as, now-a-days, in most of the developed and developing countries the unemployment gradually decreased offering new placements to youth. Eventually, due to lack of fine thinking they fail to discern real needs and problems they had to face in future with no financial security. In addition, the young are anxious to stand out among their peers in terms of beauty and gadget possession. Due to availability of lots of products with great features they buy them to know which suits them better. This leads to the spending of too much on things that would stay forever in shelfs. Seeing the youth many elders follow a similar trend to keep up with them.
Career driven parents who successfully meet the targets earn good amount and without proper guidance and assistance they leave their child with money. Not knowing what to do the child spend too much on everything that their eyes laid on. Recent research reports shows that depressed people opt for shopping as an escape from it's effects by knowing about new things and shopping is a good place to find new appliances and various varieties of products. Also, with increasing rate of population, parks and playgrounds are replaced by grand malls which make public to go and spend their free time there shopping.
In my opinion, people are wasting lots of money on unnecessary shopping as they opt shopping as an escape of depression, stress and anxiety. Once after entering into shopping area, its impossible to come out without buying anything as the products and its keepers allure them to buy things which will not be used by buyer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89130434783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54015338006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616847826087 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5586376554 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185411929055 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532206451068 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474981412783 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11465427954 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364574196 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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