These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology has taken a huge place in every individual's life that is developing day by day. Mobile phone and internet are two popular examples of technology. However, according to my perspective merits are more than demerits about which I will shed light in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with its positive side, Smart phone and internet is faster and reliable resources which helps individuals to communicate with kith and kins easily wherever they are. for example people prefer to do free audio and video calls through social media such as whatsapp, facebook, instagram and so on. these aspects has made our life easier and improved our relationship even with those people who are thousand miles away from us. Moreover, people can share their personal media like as pictures, documents, song, videos and etcetera just in few seconds with each other. Similarly, these both technical advancements are source of vast knowledge and medium of business as unlimited opportunities are available on internet which can help any person to make there identity unique in the world and become successful person.
Apart from this, smart phones provide opportunity to get distinct opportunities from itself as it is multi purpose device having entertainment, photo and video capturing, education, games and communication facilities which is the way too beneficial for individuals. However, there are some minor flaws in such kind of technical things for example there are some harmful websites or internet that can hack the personal stuff of people by corrupting their computers or phones. While, overuse of mobile phone leads to weak eye sight that is quite critical for health as well.
Hence, it can be summarized that these resources are providing us comfort as well as easier lifestyle that is why we should use it according to our need and government should also ban those sites which may harm the personal data also the feelings of people.
Comments
I am getting 8.0 here which
I am getting 8.0 here which is quite indigestible for me. Can someone please shed some light on this? I direly need some enlightenment.
I will be utterly grateful to the replies I get here.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...hnology has taken a huge place in every individuals life that is developing day by day. Mob...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...kith and kins easily wherever they are. for example people prefer to do free audio ...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...our relationship even with those people who are thousand miles away from us. Moreover, ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...tionship even with those people who are thousand miles away from us. Moreover, people ca...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
..., overuse of mobile phone leads to weak eye sight that is quite critical for health as we...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should use it according to our need and government should also ban those sites w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, while, apart from, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1974522293 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67761488748 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4184441418 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172942762086 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607690022338 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321950729893 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946053095273 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324703533702 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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