In the time past, photographers use to give us real images of people and places. Nowadays, it is difficult to trust what they give us.
Is this a negative or positive development.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience or knowledge.
In the past era, photographers normally capture and present to us, the actual pictures of locations and individuals. However, people argue that nowadays, it is difficult to believe the images being shown to them. In my opinion, this is a negative development because it can present a false reality to individuals and cause teenagers to develop bad health conditions, striving to have the perfect image.
In the world today, many people find it hard to see as authentic, the images photographers present to us, hence, this is a negative development because it can create a sterotype of a perfect image based on false reality. For example, a female person might see an image of a model, with all the perfect body curves that has being edited on the image, hence, this false reality can convince her to opt for a cosmetic surgery even when unnecessary, to attain the perfect posture. Ultimately, this will grow a culture of young adults striving to be this altered images, even though they depict a false reality and this can be a dangerous trend.
Furthermore, another reason why this development is not a positive one is because this can cause individuals especially teenagers to develop critical health conditions such as anorexia nervosa, trying to be the perfect image. Ultimately, this instance can cause them to be more vulnerable to different illnesses because they lack the necessary nutrients and a balanced diet to boost their immune system.
In conclusion, the images seen nowadays are difficult to see as true, thus, I believe this is a bad development because this can lead to a sterotype based on false body images, which could have dire consequences and can make teenagers develop bad health condition in trying to get the best body image they see on magazines, altered by photographers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01328903654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83182399892 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501661129568 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7538659861 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.666666667 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168368490725 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841397802776 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339406460119 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115132255675 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230632795037 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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