Today, the high sales of popular consumer good reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the advertising is one of method that can be increased to grow sales of consumer goods and no longer real need of the society was sold. Personally, I agree with the statement. There are some reasons that be explained in the next paragraph.
Firstly, the advertising is one of ways which is chosen by almost companies, moreover industries in the world has improved marketing method area significantly to introduce their product to society, so that their product can be popular in the world. There are many facilities that could be made to produce marketing consumer goods particularly which is needed by people every time. The marketing is one of most important areas to earn money to increase profit. in other hand, industries of consumer goods make special advertising department to sell their product even create important rule to support product selling. For example, Unilever Corporation establishes big promotion in all country in the world that is dire on television with highly cost.
Secondly, the other aspects of this argument such have on the television screen. The product looks like good quality and it was marketed by famous people like popular actor or singer. Sometimes several people not thinking about salary because they can be influenced by advertising even spend of money to buy something which is not important. As a result of it, people often buy good without consideration.
In conclusion, I believe advertising is a good method to introduce the product in the world particularly sales of consumer goods but almost people were influenced by advertising because advertising on the television screen looks a good quality as result people buy without enough review.
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Essay evaluation report
one of method
one of methods
Sentence: There are some reasons that be explained in the next paragraph.
Description: The token that is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative
Suggestion: Refer to that and be
moreover industries in the world has improved
moreover industries in the world have improved
Sentence: Firstly, the advertising is one of ways which is chosen by almost companies, moreover industries in the world has improved marketing method area significantly to introduce their product to society, so that their product can be popular in the world.
Description: The fragment by almost companies is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace almost with adjective
with highly cost.
with high cost.
Sentence: Secondly, the other aspects of this argument such have on the television screen.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to argument and such
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 143 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1396 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.076 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.764 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.899 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...areas to earn money to increase profit. in other hand, industries of consumer good...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278523489933 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.177852348993 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0704697986577 0.0946595960268 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0604026845638 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0268456375839 0.0437548338989 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137583892617 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0469798657718 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83418097837 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335570469799 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0738255033557 0.0861772015684 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134228187919 0.021408717616 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201342281879 0.011925033212 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21090909091 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389090909091 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305454545455 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207272727273 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152727272727 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83418097837 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 52.0489417023 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1538461538 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3853299669 49.517814964 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.6993006993 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.74683544304 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459548405061 0.332605444948 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113213277618 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835215702969 0.0668466124924 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541999009503 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183877007643 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191739294578 0.134430193775 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976088108418 0.0742795772207 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349306415172 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0673908390664 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338834566927 0.228012699653 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667798041782 0.058150111329 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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