Today the high sales of popular consumer goods, reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The advertisement is a decisive factor in enhancing companies’ sale trend and the influence of eye-catching products on people’s decisions continues to be a controversial topic. Personally, I agree with the idea that there is a positive correlation between the high purchasing of well-known goods and the commercial capability.
On the one hand, it is admitted that the nature of advertising is to manipulate individuals so as to channel shoppers’ choices. Regarding the power of advertisement, it can be said that one of the actionable technique is celebrity endorsement in order to outbreak their productions. Consequently, folks would be more likely to imitate and in addition purchase special brand’s goods, which there is no essential demand for. As it can be seen in the tremendous amount of sale for trendy and fashionable designer clothes, Moda and Versace for instance, which embodies this idea perfectly.
Furthermore, it would be claimed that advertisements offer companies with finding their way to enter foreign markets and in addition might compel people to purchase apparently high-quality products, even if they do not need that. For example, those who obsessed with cutting-edge devices always trying to be aware of incoming of the latest gadgets, without even thinking whether they may use it or not, so as to purchase it. This has obviously been seen in Apple smartphones.
To conclude, due to the reasons mentioned above I completely agree with the idea that the advertisement plays a vital role in the soaring the sales of well-known goods and enticing people to buy their products. Also, it is universally accepted just by looking at current trends this issue is less likely to follow the demands of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29285714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23071199583 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1528183823 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127266034533 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043429103028 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313157329472 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073055571925 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106023467845 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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