Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where everything is made possible irrespective of obstacles. It is often believed by some people that there is an increased number of tourists in extreme places like the Sahara and Antarctic deserts. In this essay, I will explore both merits and demerits of this phenomenon along with proper conclusion.
To commence with, as a consequence of globalisation, the transportation sector has been developed to a great extent providing navigation to farthest places across the world. In other words, advancements in the transport field are beneficial for several reasons such as access to explore popular remote areas and allowing people to view the breathtaking views of these sites. Additionally, enabling more and more tourists can boost the tourism industry as well as the fame of the original place. To illustrate, a recent report states that a large number of individuals are showing more interest in viewing unique creatures such as camels and penguin’s that they have learnt in their schools and universities. Thereby, it enhances and satisfies their anxiety and fascination with respect to their education.
On the other hand, despite the excellent opportunities for easy accessibility to everyone, there exist many drawbacks such as challenges during transit, peak weather conditions and insufficient facilities. Although there is a rise in travel agencies in recent years to guide travellers, human bodies cannot easily adopt to new climate at ease. Moreover, the transportation that traverses people to such places is not suitable for everyone, as various health aspects come into picture. Finally, if there is any occurrence of emergency discrepancies during the visit might disappoint the fellow individual mood. For instance, many travel partner companies employ adequate resources required for the tourists, it is impossible to predict human health with respect to climatic changes.
To recapitulate, even though there are few cons for travelling to far deserted sites, there are enough pros that need to be taken into consideration as they can give the real life experiences, knowledge and enjoyment for enthusiastic people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, with respect to, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52522255193 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02664804738 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637982195846 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3028921904 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25175530833 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698414485467 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640616252636 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118380133922 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449038139738 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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